Audience Feedback

We produced various rough cuts and some sample scenes to show to a samples of our target audience as we went along.  The response was mostly positive and our sample liked the choice of setting however there were various criticisms we took on board and tried to improve on.

"Setting is very good, acting could be better, cuts could be shorter" Alex Jowwet 25/03/09

"Could have used a greater variety of shots" Ben Garvey 27/03/09

"Lighting was effective, too long takes, Footsteps are not in time with heartbeat" Sophie Gannon 27/03/09

Final Cut Feedback

"Cutting of flashbacks were effective

"Black and white flashbacks are very effective and build tension" Lucy Heathcote 1/04/09

"Heat beat sound effective at building tension, follows common codes and conventions well" Laura Beck 01/04/09

"Found the flashbacks a great improvement and particularly effective" 1/04/09 Lucy Johnson (Fellow media student)

"Music works well at the beginning, sound effects are good" 2/04/09 Laura Beck

"Didn't understand the house, liked the music, liked the flashbacks" 2/04/09 Matt Lowe 

"Really good like the start, don't understand the house" 2/04/09 Alex Jowwet